“A main disagreement that I have seen while researching my topic, would be more or less considered the blame game. There are a lot of different opinions out there about who is responsible for cyber bullying, internet harassment, and cat-fishing that have created an outcome of different mental illnesses that could even result into suicide. Obviously these are big problems that need to be addressed but I have not really found a common theme about whether it is the users fault, the websites fault, or the supervisors fault. It seems like everyone has information and facts that support what they believe is right. This makes it a little hard sometimes to establish black and white fact from stretched opinions.”
For right now, this is the voice that seems to come most naturally to me. Some questions I have are..
Is it okay if I use first person?
I will try to incorporate specific articles and quotes on my beta draft as well as acknowledge them correctly so beside the absence is it okay if my voice is relaxed like this paragraph? or should I try to stray away from slang or phrases?