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  1. This isn’t quite working for me. The logic is off. How does “studying technology used to study the ocean” naturally/logically lead to “…because I want to find out how understanding the oceans is beneficial to us.”???

    Maybe it’d work better as:

    I AM STUDY oceanographic technology

    BECAUSE I WANT TO FIND OUT how technology is invaluable in advancing our understanding of ocean life

    IN ORDER TO HELP MY READERS see why they should support efforts to fund the development of technology for oceanography.

    ***

    Even that’t not great; it’s hard to imagine counterarguments, but maybe I’m just not knowledgeable enough about the subject.

    What do you think?

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